Monday, July 18, 2011

7. The Book of Stories OCT round 1 by da-kasha


Alan the half-elven librarian gets sent to the mystical fairy tale kingdom of Space-Station-in-Geostationary-Orbit Land where he must defeat an evil witch and rescue a beautiful princess. Behold his magical adventure of not caring!!!

3 comments:

  1. "-I love the humor and snarkiness of the the characters. The writing is very fluid and easy on the eyes.
    -Nice bionic servants, hehe. I like how they look like a cross between washing machines and baking utensils...
    -I kind of wished this game had a bit of music, even if it were free pieces online. ^^; I think some of the scenes (e.g. the scene with the dragon) could have used a bit of background music to compliment them.
    -I enjoyed the backgrounds and the character art, although I think a couple of CG cutscenes would have illustrated the scenes a little better.
    -Lovely work overall! :)"

    -Anonymous Judge

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  2. "Initially I was really confused about the story. To me, it mixes olden royalty and space themes to create a very unique storyline.

    I felt that the main character didn't belong in this story even though it was supposed to be in his nature to not care, it felt as if he's stumble upon this vn by mistake.

    One part confused me where the 'narrator' described the princess but the art itself did not fit the description.

    Overall I thought it was alright."

    -Anonymous Judge

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  3. "-I laugh for a long, long time as I played this story. The satirical sense of humor and parody brought me a beacon of hope and happiness in an otherwise dreary world, quite like the one they ended up in. The characters were unique and interesting, the plot flow was smooth (for being a parody) and there were only some minor grammatical and spelling errors. Being the only comedy, this really stood out to me.

    -No music or my speakers weren't working...

    - The art was different than what I am used to seeing, but still incredibly well done. Even though there were some minor differences in style between the backgrounds and sprites, but it was still really good and blended together well.

    - Textbox was a tad small, as well as the font. However, that was the only complaint I have from the interface department.

    - Overall, this really brightened my day. The witty and satirical humor was crisp and something I rarely see in visual novels."

    -Anonymous Judge

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